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Kash

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Aug 22, 2008 08:12    Quote
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Hi Guys and Gals with a creative streak! I have just begun this story and I am looking for people who can continue this tale. It can be a paragraph or anything. Each person can add more to the story. So, lets see where this story takes us and how long this tale can actually get! Have fun!

It was a stormy night when Jane looked out of her attic window. Her rather crooked aunt, Bess, had locked her up in the room. Jane wondered about yet another miserable night in the attic and how terrible it would be to sleep on an empty stomach. She longed to break free from this misery and went towards the window hoping she would find a way to escape. The wind raged and tugged at the rather dowdy curtains put up on the attic window. Jane rushed there and threw it open. The rain splattered in through the opening and Jane thrust her face out to breathe in the cool and fresh air. As the lightening struck, Jane thought she saw something move inside the house on the hill, which was on the opposite side. She could not understand the image but she could see a rather ghostly figure moving about in one of the rooms and a faint trace of light. ‘Strange!’, thought Jane since no one was supposed to have occupied that house for many years. As the wind howled, it carried faint sounds of digging along with it from the same direction. Jane’s curiosity got the better of her and she forgot all about her pangs of hunger. She stretched out of the window and found a rather sturdy pipe to cling on to. Gingerly, she lifted herself and moved on to the ledge. Little by little, Jane edged her way downwards and clung on to the pipe till she reached the garden. Here, she heaved a sigh of relief and rushed towards the lane that led to the hill. Drenched in the rain, she approached the house, excited about her little adventure. The noise became louder and louder as Jane entered the lonely garden. The night was dark and she would barely find her way towards the window. As she approached it, and settled herself next to a rather prickly bush, she waited for the light to shine again through the window. Suddenly, she saw something ghostly move across the room…and Jane almost let out a scream of fright!

Please continue the story.......

Mrinal

posts: 11

Aug 23, 2008 08:01    Quote
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Jane saw a lady in white vanish with her screeching cry. She stealthily tried to move away from that house. Jane could sense someone brushing past her with every step as if someone was accompanying her. The moment she stopped she would hear mumbled voices, she started sweating in the cold weather.

 

Suddenly a thought flashed in her mind “What if its not a ghost, if its an angel? She would be my friend whom I would share my feelings with. Maybe she can help me get rid of aunt. What if the otherwise is true?” Jane could feel some occult energy passing within her as she turned back towards the house on the hill again.

Sixth-Sense

posts: 14

Aug 23, 2008 08:38    Quote
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the lady that Jane saw... now she doubted it was neither an angel nor the ghost..it must have been her crooked aunt, who played this new trick to scare her!!
With this thought she made herself a bit comfortable and reached out to the last step on the stair, thinking of opening the door of her room...she moved towards it... and the door opened all by itself with a cracking noise!!!...

Shivering out...she murmured  "now this can't be the aunt's play! then who was it?"

rajnish

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Aug 28, 2008 14:37    Quote
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ohhh my god she is the old lady who seems like died before two hundred years........ jane so much scred and not a single word coming from her face. noone is there also whom she can call....... but after sometime she dared herself to go near the lady bcoz the lady was looiking harmless........... she ran towards her room and held a iron rod and went near the lady..... when she reached her then there....................... very silent and a rat from the body of the lady jumped over jane and ................. she woke up from the scary dream with a loud shout by which her aunt came near her and........

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